Capturing Love

By ebj.2014, St. John, WA

If love could be drawn,
I'd grab every color,
Use the globe as my canvas,
And paint the world for you.

This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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torilutz8 said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 11:01 am:

Oh this is so sweet! I love this, unique and creative. Well done, keep it up :)

ebj.2014 replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 2:16 am :

Thanks so much! :)

beautifulspirit said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 9:12 am:

So sweet---so original. Along the lines like "I'll give you the moon", or something, but you made it your own. Splendid~

ebj.2014 replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 2:17 am :

Thank you very much! I really appreciate the feedback! :)

Dreamgirl95 said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 5:54 pm:

awww... soooo sweet and sincere:) Keep Writing!

Writerforlife7423 replied...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 10:25 pm :

Thanks so much! I'll check out some of your work, too! :)

Simplemelody said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 10:35 am:

Simple yet excellent

Writerforlife7423 replied...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 3:17 pm :

Thanks so much! I really appreciate the feedback. And I commented on one of your poems, too! Hope I helped. :) Thanks again!