Autumn Rambles MAG

November 17, 2011
By HisPurePrincess ELITE, Flemington, New Jersey
HisPurePrincess ELITE, Flemington, New Jersey
132 articles 33 photos 483 comments

how much do you wonder
before you uncross your legs
move across the expanse
with the wind at your back
the silence like a movie
the twilight like a song
the leaves crunching under your feet
like good-byes that only end at the first snowfall

I wonder at the evergreen
my hair hanging down and arms stretched out
across the field of fallen blossoms
still alive
till sweetly singing
the song like moonlight
the dusk like an ending
the smell of dirty chocolate in the air that calls, calls you home

is it autumn or a dream?
I could not say
but after shadows fall
the song still lingers in the moment
haunting
the ever-after promises of frost


The author's comments:
isn't it beautifully wonderful to say things that you mean without implying meaning and everything subtly implied?

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on Jan. 29 2012 at 6:26 pm
it takes a while to understand what this means, it's very thoughtful and thought-provoking, but I can see it when I take a step back.

on Nov. 25 2011 at 11:55 pm
HisPurePrincess ELITE, Flemington, New Jersey
132 articles 33 photos 483 comments
Thank you so much!  This is the type of poem that I love to write.  Abstract in my thing.  

Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 1:17 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

This is so beautiful and imaginative. It's got such a sense of tranquility in it and I have rated it 5/5! It's amazing...seriously:D




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