Misunderstanding

November 10, 2011
By TaurusGal GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
TaurusGal GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
13 articles 25 photos 110 comments

Seems that the blossom floats within,
A touch of warmth instantly came,
The most excitatory state you have even been,
A chimera of shining teeth showing.

Until something unexpected comes up,
A person came by and said you’re naïve,
Never listen but to crush you into pieces,
Ruin your happiness from the state of relaxation.

Falling from heaven to hell,
Heart sinks down into the abyss ceaselessly.
Deep within was frost and storm,
Inserted with needles which made tears shed.

Why, oh why should I cry?
Where are my dignity and my pride?
Knowing it is only a little setback,
made me wonder like a lunatic.

Life is often about misunderstanding,
To brace one’s heart after battles.
Not a relief or a scream,
Left behind was only trust to yourself.



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so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 9:28 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Great job. This poem is very interesting and makes you think. Nice work. I enjoyed reading it. Please read,rate,and comment on my poems! Thanks!

TaurusGal GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2012 at 1:04 pm
TaurusGal GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
13 articles 25 photos 110 comments
Thank you so much.  It means a lot too me.  This motivated me to write more, knowing how people like you truly appreciate my work.  =]'' 

on Apr. 5 2012 at 10:25 am
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

Good job. I ddnt see anything wrong with the English at first, but when i checked back there were inconsitances. but this TOTALLY proves that you are a good writer and as ur english improves, so will your writing. This was pretty and it was filled with just overall good style choices and a bit of a rythm. NICE JOB!

TaurusGal GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 12:01 pm
TaurusGal GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
13 articles 25 photos 110 comments
Haha,,, that's cool

TaurusGal GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 12:00 pm
TaurusGal GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
13 articles 25 photos 110 comments
Thanks, my first language is not English. And i'm kind of bad at English, so i'm just in the process of learning. =]

on Mar. 25 2012 at 11:15 am
Prometheus PLATINUM, East Aurora, New York
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Interesting diction.  Is english your first language?  Some parts were difficult to understand.  But you definitely have a style of  your own.

on Mar. 25 2012 at 11:13 am
Midnight_Starsong GOLD, Wesson, Mississippi
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
She never once gave up. My mom is my hero.

Please keep your comments positive and constructive. We'll remove anything inappropriate. Thanks!

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on Mar. 25 2012 at 12:36 am
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Intense, I really like it. I can tell there's a lot of emotion in it - I can relate. Keep it up. :)

on Mar. 25 2012 at 12:36 am
Dawnzy15 SILVER, Belize CA, Other
6 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Waza!
Let me be.
Don't try to change me just love me and accept me! I love me and I love you... So just love me.

Impressive. Your writing style is one that touches everyones soul in different ways. Bravo on this poem.

TaurusGal GOLD said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 10:34 pm
TaurusGal GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
13 articles 25 photos 110 comments
Thank you very much. =]

on Mar. 24 2012 at 10:10 pm
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.

This poem holds such truth--very well written!! Makes me reflect on my own misunderstandings that happened in my life.

TaurusGal GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 9:10 am
TaurusGal GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
13 articles 25 photos 110 comments
Thank you so much, this means a lot. =D

Shivam GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 9:05 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

True words.... nice work....
Keep writing....

on Mar. 23 2012 at 8:50 am
waterbendercarorain GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

this is amazing i love it


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