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who,what,when,where,and why?

Why does the week go fast when you want it to go slow,
why are there things you'll never know,
where can you be secure,
where there is no pain to endure,
who will love you forever,
who will leave you never,
when will you find your one,
when will your lifelong search be done,
what is your set of skills,
what will you do if you can't pay your bills,
how will you face your fears,
will drown your tears will beers,
when will you trade the drugs for hugs,
who will you trust,
when will life to you be just,
who will you lose,who will stay,
who will be around to make your day,
what will be your goal,
what's hidden in your soul,
how will your friends,
when will your time end,




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ByThisBlindingLightThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 9:00 pm:
Totally awesome. theyre like, the questions of life, it's really good :)
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 10:16 am :
Exactally! The questions of life that we all want to know the awnsers to. Great Job! I think, however, that there should have been AT LEAST ONE question mark SOMEWHERE in the poem. I mean, near half a million questions, and it has as many comma. Im not gonna let that mess with my judgement of you poem though, it's still great. Just rememer that all sentances have an end, all sentances in the form of a question end in a question mark.
 
julywinters1226 replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 8:20 pm :
sorry about not having any question marks.lol.I think I just forgot them.:P
 
julywinters1226 replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 8:21 pm :

????????????????????

might be too late but pretend those were in there.

 
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thefamoustapper said...
Nov. 20, 2011 at 4:38 pm:
I have no idea why i started crying when reading this but this made me think, i don't know where im going with...life. Superb!
 
ZetoniThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 9:26 am :
Wow, you're so into my mind:P
 
julywinters1226 replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 8:23 pm :
thanks.I'm glad it got into your mind and triggered your emotions.:)
 
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