To gina

November 5, 2011
By Dreammer GOLD, Montrose, Pennsylvania
Dreammer GOLD, Montrose, Pennsylvania
19 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like quicksand the further you fall the harder it is to get out


We all have our demons
Ones we have to fight of 
Memories from the past
The good and the bad 
Evils what we seem to know best
They never seem to give up 
They never let us forget 
But what hunts you most only makes you stronger. 
You are not your demon 
Your demon doesn't define you 
You are stronger than that
You can't let him be you 
Fight for yourself 
And save yourself from the past 
You can sculpt your future
Capture your dreams 
Believe In yourself 
Because I believe In you:) <3


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on Nov. 22 2011 at 12:12 pm
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

I love this! Creative use of contrasting words.

Critics: All i can say is try using more puntuation. It will help the audience understand both the poem and the plot.



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