Darker Than Light

November 1, 2011
By Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19


Love the darkness in the morning,
Love the light of the night.
Hate the clouds that block the moon,
Hate the haze the that shadows the sun.
Believe in the darkness in your heart,
Believe in the light that shows through your soul.
Doubt the lies you conceal in your head,
Doubt the so called truths people throw in your face.
Embrace the darkness of your wishes upon the shooting stars,
Embrace the light of the lonely butterfly's wings.
Reject the boundaries of your freedom,
Reject the glory of faked forgiveness.
Lighter is the darkness of the Evening Sunrise,
Darker is the light of the Midnight Dawn.


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on May. 14 2013 at 10:45 pm
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19

Thank you very much! :D

on Sep. 16 2012 at 6:40 pm
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19

Thanks! N I will ;D

dend90 SILVER said...
on May. 9 2012 at 9:10 pm
dend90 SILVER, Irmo, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
we are going to relentlessly chase perfection, knowing full well we will not catch it, because nothing is perfect. But we are going to relentlessly chase it, because in the process we will catch excellence. I am not interested in just being good

it's amazing how you went back and forth between positive and negative. I really enjoyed it

on Apr. 30 2012 at 8:33 pm
firewithdoves GOLD, HARTFIELD, Virginia
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The way you tied this together with rythym and grace was great. I love it!

Write on


on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:03 pm
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19

Thank you lots!!!

on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:02 pm
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19

Thank You!

pitt98 GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 6:54 pm
pitt98 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
10 articles 3 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not the days in life we remember, rather the moments." 
- Walt Disney

very cool, i like the rythem of it :)

on Nov. 30 2011 at 4:17 pm
RebeccaJoy DIAMOND, Springville, New York
56 articles 12 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes it's kinda fun to do the impossible." -Walt Disney
"Go live your dream"-Disney's Tangled

that was really good. i like how you related everything together.

on Nov. 30 2011 at 12:04 am
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19

Thankyou!!!

ChaoticBliss said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 11:37 pm
ChaoticBliss, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Oh my goodness. This is beautifully written! Just so fantastic<33 I love it! 5 stars. :D

on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:18 pm
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19

Thank you, and I do too! lol :D

on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:54 pm
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:53 pm
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19

Thank you, and I'm glad you like it so much! Please read my other works too... you might like Brightness In Shadows since you like this one. :D

on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:52 pm
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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I agree with Hate Knuckle and DependentMissIndependent. Well done.

 

 


on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:48 pm
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19

Thank you for commenting!!!

on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:46 pm
HateKnuckle SILVER, Peru, New York
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I absolutely love this! I normally despise free verse but u brought it back to me. It speaks SOOOOOO well. I mean this sincerely, this is a great poem. 5 stars.

on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:44 pm
reyess_anai BRONZE, Corona, California
4 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every deep thinker is more afraid of being understood than misunderstood." Nietzsche

I like how you had 2 lines starting with the same word.

on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:33 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

This is amazing! No lies. AMAZING! Terrific job! I love your choice of words. This is so wonderfully put together. :)

on Nov. 25 2011 at 8:21 pm
blackrose666 BRONZE, Sterling Hgts, Michigan
2 articles 16 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up on something you cant go a day without thinking bout

sorry ment 4 stars -.- i hate my laptop

on Nov. 24 2011 at 1:14 pm
lovelydarkpoet SILVER, Gladstone, Missouri
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
be who you are because the ones that care dont matter and the ones matter dont care

thats amazing its really good my favorite of yours 


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