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Love the darkness in the morning,
Love the light of the night.
Hate the clouds that block the moon,
Hate the haze the that shadows the sun.
Believe in the darkness in your heart,
Believe in the light that shows through your soul.
Doubt the lies you conceal in your head,
Doubt the so called truths people throw in your face.
Embrace the darkness of your wishes upon the shooting stars,
Embrace the light of the lonely butterfly's wings.
Reject the boundaries of your freedom,
Reject the glory of faked forgiveness.
Lighter is the darkness of the Evening Sunrise,
Darker is the light of the Midnight Dawn.



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dend90 said...
May 9, 2012 at 9:10 pm
it's amazing how you went back and forth between positive and negative. I really enjoyed it
 
Purpl3Bu773rfly replied...
May 14, 2013 at 10:45 pm
Thank you very much! :D
 
firewithdoves said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 8:33 pm

The way you tied this together with rythym and grace was great. I love it!

Write on

 
PurpleButterfly19 replied...
Sept. 16, 2012 at 6:40 pm
Thanks! N I will ;D
 
pitt98 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 6:54 pm
very cool, i like the rythem of it :)
 
White_Demon_Rekishi replied...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 9:03 pm
Thank you lots!!!
 
RebeccaJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 4:17 pm
that was really good. i like how you related everything together.
 
White_Demon_Rekishi replied...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 9:02 pm
Thank You!
 
ChaoticBliss said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 11:37 pm
Oh my goodness. This is beautifully written! Just so fantastic<33 I love it! 5 stars. :D
 
White_Demon_Rekishi replied...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 12:04 am
Thankyou!!!
 
PrincessBubblegum said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:52 pm

I agree with Hate Knuckle and DependentMissIndependent. Well done.

 

 

 
White_Demon_Rekishi replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 11:18 pm
Thank you, and I do too! lol :D
 
HateKnuckle said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:46 pm
I absolutely love this! I normally despise free verse but u brought it back to me. It speaks SOOOOOO well. I mean this sincerely, this is a great poem. 5 stars.
 
White_Demon_Rekishi replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:53 pm
Thank you, and I'm glad you like it so much! Please read my other works too... you might like Brightness In Shadows since you like this one. :D
 
DependentMissIndependent said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:44 pm
I like how you had 2 lines starting with the same word.
 
White_Demon_Rekishi replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:48 pm
Thank you for commenting!!!
 
blackrose666 said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 8:21 pm
sorry ment 4 stars -.- i hate my laptop
 
sunshine7223 replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:33 pm
This is amazing! No lies. AMAZING! Terrific job! I love your choice of words. This is so wonderfully put together. :)
 
White_Demon_Rekishi replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:54 pm
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
 
Jennypig said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 7:26 pm
This is pretty serious. LOVE it! haha this is rly good keep it up =)
 
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