The Girls With...

November 5, 2011
By Ender2 PLATINUM, Hemet, California
Ender2 PLATINUM, Hemet, California
23 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If I cannot inspire love, I will cause fear!"

A sporty ginger
walks by a radiant blond:
flipping her hair,
surrounded by menfolk
“I want that,” the sporty ginger
says with a sigh.

A radiant blond
sits by an intelligent brunette:
with an A+ paper
and a smile from the teacher.
“I want that,” the radiant blond
says with a sigh.

An intelligent brunette
stands next to a sporty ginger:
kicking around a soccer ball
without the slightest effort at all.
“I want that,” the intelligent brunette
says with a sigh.

A ginger, blond, and brunette
watch a girl with blue hair:
not looking at anyone else
being content with herself.
“I want that,” the three girls
say with a sigh.

The author's comments:
Honestly, I see this all the time. I just wanted someone to realize the grass isn't always greener, just as long as you water your own lawn with encouragement every once in a while. :)

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This article has 3 comments.

on Dec. 3 2011 at 2:17 pm
Athena19 SILVER, Central Point, Oregon
5 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Love people. Cook them tasty food.' -Penzey's Spices

this is SOOO cool! I love your work! the message is awesome!

on Nov. 26 2011 at 4:23 pm
mattisonteeter GOLD, Los Angeles, California
15 articles 0 photos 57 comments
I love this! Been checking out you're work and it's really excellent. :)

on Nov. 26 2011 at 12:29 pm
ebj.2014 PLATINUM, St. John, Washington
21 articles 0 photos 50 comments
Love the message you're trying to convey! The storyline was great. Would you mind checking out some of my work please? I'd love to get some comments and feedback! Thanks!


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