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November 5, 2011
A sporty ginger
walks by a radiant blond:
flipping her hair,
surrounded by menfolk
“I want that,” the sporty ginger
says with a sigh.

A radiant blond
sits by an intelligent brunette:
with an A+ paper
and a smile from the teacher.
“I want that,” the radiant blond
says with a sigh.

An intelligent brunette
stands next to a sporty ginger:
kicking around a soccer ball
without the slightest effort at all.
“I want that,” the intelligent brunette
says with a sigh.

A ginger, blond, and brunette
watch a girl with blue hair:
not looking at anyone else
being content with herself.
“I want that,” the three girls
say with a sigh.





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Athena19 said...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 2:17 pm
this is SOOO cool! I love your work! the message is awesome!
 
mattisonteeter said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 4:23 pm
I love this! Been checking out you're work and it's really excellent. :)
 
Writerforlife7423 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 12:29 pm
Love the message you're trying to convey! The storyline was great. Would you mind checking out some of my work please? I'd love to get some comments and feedback! Thanks!
 
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