Even Daddy Has A Down Fall

October 31, 2011
By dalty PLATINUM, Gaithersburg, Maryland
dalty PLATINUM, Gaithersburg, Maryland
24 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
That at a certain point in our lives, we lose control of what's happening to us, and our lives become controlled by fate. That's the world's greatest lie." - Paulo Coelho


Help me survive
Don't you want me to stay alive?
Help me breathe
Because I can't do it alone

I'm to weak
My life supply must have a leak
I need more
or less...not sure

My family needs me
But i can't fight the needing
It's calling my name
I'm coming little friend

Addiction becomes conviction
Addiction becomes conviction
Addiction becomes conviction
Addiction becomes conviction


The author's comments:
i wrote this as if i was in my fathers shoes..

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dalty PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 14 2013 at 8:18 am
dalty PLATINUM, Gaithersburg, Maryland
24 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
That at a certain point in our lives, we lose control of what's happening to us, and our lives become controlled by fate. That's the world's greatest lie." - Paulo Coelho

Thank you so much!

on Jan. 26 2013 at 3:03 pm
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
13 articles 1 photo 303 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.

You are only as strong as your weakest link.

Wow, a well-written and powerful poem, especially the repetition. Good job!




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