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Life On Their Breath

October 27, 2011
By Moga321 BRONZE, Bayside, Wisconsin
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Moga321 BRONZE, Bayside, Wisconsin
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Her first dream died so she became a woman ~ Zora Neale Hurston, "Their Eyes Were Watching God"

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A cool wave rushing
A white cloud drifting
A small whispered wish
A calm peaceful mist
A lust within the mind
A love residing inside
A breeze in the wind
A twinkle in her eye
A kiss on his lips
Life on their breath
A kiss on his lips
A twinkle in her eye
A breeze in the wind
A love residing inside
A lust within the mind
A calm peaceful mist
A small whispered wish
A white cloud drifting
A cool wave rushing

© Shawn P., Las Cruces, NM

The author's comments:
I wrote this in school, since half the time I'm bored out of my mind. I really like this one because it is unique and not many poems are written like this.
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Moga321 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 5:54 pm
Moga321 BRONZE, Bayside, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Her first dream died so she became a woman ~ Zora Neale Hurston, "Their Eyes Were Watching God"

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Thanks a lot!!!
Moga321 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 5:54 pm
Moga321 BRONZE, Bayside, Wisconsin
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Her first dream died so she became a woman ~ Zora Neale Hurston, "Their Eyes Were Watching God"

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Thank you so much!
HaleeBreanne BRONZE said...
on Nov. 5 2011 at 5:18 pm
HaleeBreanne BRONZE, Pacolet Mills, SC, South Carolina
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" Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning to dance in the rain!"

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i love this poem! great imagery
Wonderer said...
on Nov. 5 2011 at 11:54 am
Wonderer, High Point, North Carolina
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Wow! That was amazing, love the word use