Judgment Day

October 26, 2011
By ChocoholicRUs BRONZE, Rochester, New York
ChocoholicRUs BRONZE, Rochester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"We have nothing to fear but fear itself."


I sit in my room thinking of what to write.
I look at it again and the insecurity kicks in.
Is it good?
Will it get approved?
Should I redo it?
It looked okay with me,
So I shut my notebook.

Judgment day!
I go first and my work is dissed.
I’m holding back tears and all the self-doubt comes back.
My self-esteem goes down a notch.

That night I edit and edit.
Finally I’m done!
It’s not perfect but I hope it will pass inspection.


The author's comments:
It is about something that actually happened.

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on Nov. 5 2011 at 1:52 pm
ChocoholicRUs BRONZE, Rochester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"We have nothing to fear but fear itself."

She is hard to impress.

on Nov. 3 2011 at 7:25 pm
Imperfectlife SILVER, Rochester, New York
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Wow! I like it a lot. I understand the way you said about self-esteem going down. I had that too.


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