Too Many Pieces...I Am Dead

October 23, 2011
By RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?


Too many pieces,
my heart.
Like shattered glass,
every piece cutting through me,
like a knife.
Now covered in blood,
the pain I hold is visible.
All the sorrow I hold inside,
is oozing out my broken heart,
for all public to see.
To hear my screams,
and feel my lifeless heart,
taste the blood inside your mouth,
that was once keeping me alive.
My heart,
now shattered.
I am dead


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on Dec. 12 2011 at 3:13 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

"hauntingly beautiful" awwww :) thx kendis

on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:51 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

awwwww thankyou!!!!!! :)

on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:45 pm
GretaGibson PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
23 articles 4 photos 23 comments
the pain i hold is now visible.... i love that line its so hauntingly beautiful! Great job brooke

on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:31 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

thank you :) alot :)

Loftus GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:23 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

I love this. Quite an amazing piece of work. 


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