Too Many Pieces...I Am Dead

October 23, 2011
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Too many pieces,
my heart.
Like shattered glass,
every piece cutting through me,
like a knife.
Now covered in blood,
the pain I hold is visible.
All the sorrow I hold inside,
is oozing out my broken heart,
for all public to see.
To hear my screams,
and feel my lifeless heart,
taste the blood inside your mouth,
that was once keeping me alive.
My heart,
now shattered.
I am dead

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KendisPiper This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 9:45 pm
the pain i hold is now visible.... i love that line its so hauntingly beautiful! Great job brooke
BeyondTheBrooke replied...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 9:51 pm
awwwww thankyou!!!!!! :)
DrowningInTheBrooke replied...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 3:13 pm
"hauntingly beautiful" awwww :) thx kendis
BrokenBree said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:23 pm
I love this. Quite an amazing piece of work. 
LivingMYLife replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:31 pm
thank you :) alot :)
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