Breaking Dawn

October 23, 2011
By NadimAzar BRONZE, Beirut,
NadimAzar BRONZE, Beirut,
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I saw her standing in the grass
She was surrounded by flowers
Goldenrod
Dandelion
One drop of rain
The floating pollen drifted around her
Two drops of rain
She sensed fear rushing towards her
Three,four,five drops of rain
Her body divided itself into hotness
Coldness
A softness and a hardness
A trembling and a not trembling
The wind whistled a single note across the black morning sky
All rushing on down around in a spouting roar ,
A rivering stream
Heading towards the morning
A dim light appeared
The little clump of flowers stood alone
Awaiting sunrise.



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on Nov. 24 2011 at 2:01 pm
NadimAzar BRONZE, Beirut,
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Thank you.. i appreciate it

OceanFey GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 11:23 am
OceanFey GOLD, North Potomac, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
It is easy to hate and it is difficult to love. This is how the whole scheme of things works. All good things are difficult to achieve; and bad things are very easy to get. - Confucius

I love the sheer delicacy of the language in this poem! Keep up the good work - can't wait to see more of your poems. 

on Nov. 8 2011 at 12:37 pm
NadimAzar BRONZE, Beirut,
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Thanks a lot for all the support

on Nov. 5 2011 at 11:31 am
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
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wow this is so beautiful!! it's definitely one of my favorites I've read on here. I hope it gets published in the print magazine!!

"The wind whistled a single note across the black morning sky" <-- favorite line


on Nov. 4 2011 at 2:16 pm
NadimAzar BRONZE, Beirut,
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thanks :)I Appreciate it ..

on Nov. 4 2011 at 1:14 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you" Tyler Durden Fight Club

This is really good. I love the imagry. Really nice job.

on Nov. 4 2011 at 1:06 pm
NadimAzar BRONZE, Beirut,
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Thanks.. I truly appreciate your comment :)

on Nov. 4 2011 at 12:58 pm
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

Wow. You are amazing!

on Nov. 2 2011 at 1:45 pm
NadimAzar BRONZE, Beirut,
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Thanks everyone for your support

YaraSerhal said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 10:44 am
I absolutely love that poem ; couldn't stop reading it for many consecutive times. Keep it up ! xx

on Nov. 1 2011 at 7:29 pm
Emin3mAC SILVER, Nogalas, Arizona
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Beautifly Written Hun(: Keep posting can't wait to read your next works(((: Check mine out iif you have the chance((:

Mikey72 said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 3:51 pm
Wow ..It is truly a wonderful poem..

andyrahi said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 3:46 pm
So deep, expressive & well written. Love it! Keep it up! :) xxx




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