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Between school daze
and summer knights
I sit in my scholarly tower,
Penning chivalry
of the noblest sort.
The epitome of manhood,
Black ink spurs forth
his college-ruled steed,
toward the spiral-bound
damsel in distress.
She is held captive
by the tightest of margins,
her ransom clearly demanded
on the syllabus.
He fights incoherent thoughts,
empty passion,
and clichés of all shapes and sizes,
bravely rescuing said damsel
from the securely zipped back pack
of her own quivering mind.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

This work has won the Teen Ink contest in its category. This piece won the November 2008 Teen Ink Poetry Contest.




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DaleTheWhaleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 10 at 10:10 pm:
Reading this a few times, I've not quite figured out how exactly this makes sense...but maybe's that the point. Definitely well written, definitely well done.
 
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IndiloveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 18 at 8:27 am:
This is absolulty amazing!!! Seriously this is great!!! AMAZING WORK!!!
 
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Blueeyedgirl18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 3 at 11:00 am:
Amazing work!
 
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RedFeatherThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 7:16 pm:
Wow. Awesome poem! Love the way you ended it too! Congrats on making the magazine, btw. Can anyone check out some of my work if you've got some free time?
 
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Big k said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 10:17 am:
Huh...........
 
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dakotawright said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 11:06 am:
I love this poem. As simple as that, I love it.
 
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Natasha1994 said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 1:17 pm:

i love this poem good description on it 

great job

 
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Lexie96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 5:02 pm:
Love it, and love what it was describing. Great work, check out some of mine if you have the time?
 
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summerlengyel said...
Oct. 14, 2011 at 7:33 pm:
I love the first two lines with the daze and knights, very creative. Awesome work!
 
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BrightBurningCampeadorThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 8:18 pm:
I like it a lot! As an avid fantasy reader and long time fantasy writer I can put my own emotions and experiences into these words. It's most definitely not every poem I can do that with.
 
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kankles are sexxy said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 10:35 am:
Gurl please chivalry died a long time ago!!!!
 
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ChainedDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 11, 2011 at 8:56 pm:
Fantastic. A beautiful extended metaphor, well written... 
 
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Lakisha G. said...
Sept. 11, 2011 at 7:28 pm:
This is a great poem and I am so glad that I read it. The title is waht attracted me and like the title, the poem is very attractive and descriptive. Very well written. Great job!!
 
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afflatus said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 10:02 am:
hey nice work.....<3
 
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Zelda2h2 said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 11:00 am:
it's beautiful, it's inspiring, I love how you take the simplest of items and phrases and turn them into a fairy tale work of art.
 
Shyzilla replied...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 8:43 pm :
i so agree!
 
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JustAnotherOwlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 27, 2011 at 11:27 am:
I love this! It's incredible! (:
 
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reblep said...
May 16, 2011 at 4:04 pm:
i absolutly love how this is one big metaphor, mainly the first two lines, it is so amazing. 
 
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Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 2, 2011 at 6:32 pm:

I love the metaphor!!!

I love this poem!!

 
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Phantomlover95 said...
May 1, 2011 at 4:49 pm:
This was a great metaphor! I really enjoyed reading it, I found a smile spreading across my face as my eyes fluttered from side to side, while reading. This was wonderful! Great job!
 
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starlight26This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 8:56 pm:

GREAT METAPHOR!!! So different and interesting! I loved it :)

Check out some of my work if you'd like !

 
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WillowFalls This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 5:05 pm:
Love it!!!! Great poem! :)
 
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ConstanceN said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 3:10 pm:
This poem is amazing! Extremely well written and the extended metaphor works all the way through :)
 
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SuperSenior said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 8:58 am:
This is beautiful a great work of poetry and art
 
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BeatlesLove97 said...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 2:34 pm:
This is fantastic! If I could ask anyone in the world to teach me how to write amazing poetry it would be you :)
 
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KiyokoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 11:23 am:
Nice! I like how you consistently tie the knight back to things pertaining to writing, and the metaphor isn't lost along the way. Nicely done. If you have the time, check out mine? :)
 
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Shminkanator5000 said...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 7:39 am:
i loved this! SO well written and with very cool word play.
 
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cantabile said...
Dec. 21, 2010 at 8:45 pm:
Loved it. I could picture the whole thing!
 
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star-gazing-dreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 21, 2010 at 5:46 pm:
I love your poem! " he fights  incoherent thought, empty passion, and cliches of all shapes and sizes"  is my favorite line. Well written.  :)
 
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DakotaShadowThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 21, 2010 at 8:31 am:
I love how its school daze and summer knights instead of school days and summer nights. its really kicks off your poem :)
 
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in_wonderlandThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 8:50 pm:
I luv it! Writing a poem about writing a story...very creative! :)
 
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bluegirl440This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 9:53 am:
Fantastic! I love this poem...
 
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MelanieLouiseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 1:00 pm:
i really love the play on words, very clever :) keep writing,  Mel
 
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xovanillatwilightxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 11:42 am:
i really enjoyed this! i loved the concept and everything about it :)
 
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-daydreamer-This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 1:01 pm:
Wow, this is amazing! I love your choice of words!
 
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kms777 said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 5:21 pm:
wow i would never be able to write so wonderfully exspecially in language like they use so long ago!!! amazing!!! hope you'll read some of mine to. i need someone like u to tell me what  i need to work on
 
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beautifulworld said...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 1:29 pm:
Wonderful!! I loved the wordplay
 
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Phantom93 said...
May 3, 2010 at 10:58 am:
LOVED IT!!!!! that was pretty amazing! it would be #1 if it were up to me...
 
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Izzy=) said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 9:19 pm:
i agree wit the last comment lol
 
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ceruleanconfusion said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 7:40 pm:

so great!

the wordplay in the first couple of lines had me hooked.

 
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Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 3:37 pm:
i don't approve of the 'damsel in distrass' storyline. good puns, though.
 
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Howler said...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 2:40 pm:
I loved it! Check out my forum its a poem called the principle people
 
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decembersun14 said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 10:44 am:
i love this! sooooooo good! i love your choice of words and it flows so well! Great poem!
 
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A.L.S. said...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 11:40 pm:
love love love love love oh man this is sooooooo good love love :)
 
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summer-baby said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 11:48 am:
verry well written
 
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elvinchangling55 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 12:26 pm:
i love it!! this is a theme that interests mea lot, i wrote a poem with a slightly similar feel, but i love the way the story connects with the paper 'college - rule steed'. love it!!
 
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celticreader said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 8:15 pm:
very well written! the words you wrote took the mind and gave it images of brave knights and captive princesses in the binds of a book. i love it!
 
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(:Sweetkisses<3 said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 10:51 am:
LLOOOVEEE IT
 
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kenna2013 said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:26 pm:
Amazingly Awesome! i love it!!! you should check out my poem
 
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ParisJ said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 9:52 am:
i like this
 
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