Evil Has Over Come

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He has poison in his pockets
the devil in his mind.
His bodies full of hate,
his eyes are deeply blind





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LT.Mckay said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 4:22 pm
Love it. Short, catchy, rythemic, and the title just lures me in.
 
Cheerleading_rules1245 said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 2:10 pm
I really like this poem but i think it should be a bit longer
 
Natasha1994 said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 1:19 pm
i think there is more to it it kinda feels empty but i like it i think it needs more
 
Blaker said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 7:34 am
I really like this. It seems to me that it doesn't feel finished. Like there's something missing almost. But otherwise it was great, the first sentence really drew me in.
 
Lexie96 replied...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 6:46 pm
I've got to agree, I like the work, but I feel like you should have added just a bit more onto it. A promising start, though, so keep it up! Check out my work sometime?
 
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