My Sweet Escape

October 20, 2011
By KarmaMokoto BRONZE, Tamuning, Other
KarmaMokoto BRONZE, Tamuning, Other
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You changed my world in a blink of an eye
That is something I will not deny
You put my soul from worst to best
I treasure you my dearest Maritess.

You don’t know what you’ve done for me
You pushed me to the best I can be
You really are an angel sent from above
To take care of and shower me in love.

It’s magical, those things you’ve said
You brought back my faith that almost fade.
Now my life is a dream come true
It all began when I was loved by you.

When I’m with you, I won’t cry a single tear
Your touch has chased away all my fear.
You have given me a life that is worthwhile
It is better every time you smile.

Now I have found what I am looking for
It’s you, your love, and nothing more.
You gave me this feeling of content
In my life, something I’ve never felt.

I wish I could talk ‘til the end of day
But now I’m running out of things to say.
So I’ll end by the line you already know
“I LOVE YOU” more than I can show

The author's comments:
I helped a friend write for a girl who eventually became my girlfriend.

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Mrs. A. said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 12:52 am
I like your poem.  Nice use of rhyme.

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