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She met his gaze and he smiled,
"Through it all."
He offered her his hand and pinky promised,
"Through it all."
In her white dress he put the ring on her finger,
"Through it all."
He lie sickly and dying.
The words caught in her throat she whispered,
"Through it all."



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ChaoticBlissThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 9:41 pm:

Wow, I love it. It's so simple, yet powerful and emotional. This may be really short, but it does NOT need any form of improvement whatsover. It's perfect just the way it is.

LOVE IT<33 5 stars.

 
megandaynexo replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 9:26 am :
Awww, thank you so much! I appreciate it!! :)
 
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