Melody

October 11, 2011
By Sanjana Chetia BRONZE, Saratoga, California
Sanjana Chetia BRONZE, Saratoga, California
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Ebony locks flying,
The tiny girl swings,
Her dark eyes bright
As she soars wingless
On a steel swing set.
Autumn wind listens
To her airy laughter
And the simple tunes
She hums in soft alto,
Legs swinging back
And forth to the beat.


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on Nov. 13 2011 at 7:24 pm
Raven Sisco BRONZE, Saratoga, California
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Sanjana,

This poem is so musical and gorgeous! You have so much talent!


dishajh BRONZE said...
on Nov. 13 2011 at 7:14 pm
dishajh BRONZE, Saratoga, California
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Brings back memories... Great piece of poetry

syk0130 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 13 2011 at 7:07 pm
syk0130 BRONZE, Saratoga, California
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love the imagery!

Amador said...
on Nov. 13 2011 at 6:58 pm
Amador, Saratoga, California
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Sanjana,

Wonderful poem...reminds me of a simpler time, the classical periods.


china-cat said...
on Oct. 28 2011 at 12:53 am

Hi Sanjana,

I know your dad/mum and your uncle/aunt.  This should not not take away anything from my appreciation of this work.  In fact I'm glad I was shown this.

It paints a light happy picture.

Keep your effort going!



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