Pretty Girls

October 6, 2011
By Raymond Singleton III BRONZE, Oak Park, Michigan
Raymond Singleton III BRONZE, Oak Park, Michigan
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Pretty girls with amazing personalties
Pretty girls with beautiful smiles
Pretty girls with ambition
Pretty girls with goals

Pretty Girls

I love pretty girls that's pretty inside and out

The author's comments:
Pretty girls inspired this poem the ones with beauty inside and out.

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byebye said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 10:00 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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It was great up until the last line, (the line that should really the best) which was a grammar nightmare...hate to break it to you, but grammar is really quite important. The entire word that's is very incorrect and sounds sloppy - it should be "who are".

Just a tip! SORRY if I sound rude, I'm just a big ole grammar hound =]


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