Pretty Girls

October 6, 2011
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I love pretty girls that's pretty inside and out

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raindance72 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 10:00 pm

It was great up until the last line, (the line that should really the best) which was a grammar nightmare...hate to break it to you, but grammar is really quite important. The entire word that's is very incorrect and sounds sloppy - it should be "who are".

Just a tip! SORRY if I sound rude, I'm just a big ole grammar hound =]

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