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October 19, 2011
By specialcasepolicy BRONZE, Topton, North Carolina
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Hello, Hello.
There you are.
So high in the sky,
shinning so brightly.

Last Star, Last Star.
Yes you are.
So beautifully made,
Yet so lonely up there.

When I see you,
I'm in indecision.
Shall I wish upon you,
Or shall I curse upon you?
Or shall I curse upon you?

Oh, Last Star, oh
You’re blinking away.
May I see you another day?
Bye, Bye.

© Noah P., Platte City, MO

The author's comments:
I was inspired about, of course, by the last star of the night. I couldn't get these words out of my head, until I finally wrote it down.I hope the people who are reading it, that you like it! Enjoy!
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specialcasepolicy BRONZE said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 3:18 pm
specialcasepolicy BRONZE, Topton, North Carolina
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Thanks! I would love to check out work work.
Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2011 at 9:42 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

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I did like it, it made me smile. Think you could spare some time and check out some of my work?