The Labyrinth

October 19, 2011
By JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
58 articles 7 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" CONTAINS ODOR-FIGHTING "ATOMIC-ROBOTS" THAT "SHOOT LASERS" AT YOUR "STENCH MONSTERS" AND REPLACES THEM WITH FRESH, CLEAN. MASCULINE "SCENT ELVES"." - Old Spice deodorant


Darkness to darkness,
filled with utter silence.
No one is cold
No one is warm.
Sensitivity lurks in all of them,
empathy is those who possess power.
But no one can speak,
their minds completely blank.
So they roam the labyrinth,
when the feel fear of a chasm.
They constantly whisper,
the maze has no end...
The maze has no end.
Emotions of all sorts are in their hearts,
all but one remained calm.
The light opened and asked for a liability,
over the years and fertility.
The one ask the question repeatedly,
“Was anyone sane!”


The author's comments:
Looked at the night sky, and pictured a maze. And how insane everyone goes, after something so abnormal occurs.

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on Oct. 23 2011 at 11:08 am
JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
58 articles 7 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" CONTAINS ODOR-FIGHTING "ATOMIC-ROBOTS" THAT "SHOOT LASERS" AT YOUR "STENCH MONSTERS" AND REPLACES THEM WITH FRESH, CLEAN. MASCULINE "SCENT ELVES"." - Old Spice deodorant

Sure, my teacher just should me this site so I'm new. I'm happy this one got accepted, thank you!

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2011 at 9:26 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I liked it, I can't even find anything to be a critic about so good job! Think you could check out some of my work sometime?

 





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