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Night Light

One headlight,
Persistently cutting through the night. Penetrating the blackness and filling it with light.




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aurorairis said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 6:33 pm:

Simple, but great and powerful!

Please check out some of my poems if you can!

 
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Lexie96 said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 6:30 am:
I like this a lot, the rhyme scheme is great. Do you think maybe you could check out my poem? Please?
 
Anonymous_7 replied...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 4:45 pm :

Thanks for commenting. I sure will!

 

 
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Risible said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 7:38 pm:
I really like this! Good rthyme and use of rhyme. It's sharp and catchy. One thing I'd change would be put the line "Penetrating...and" on its own line. 
 
Anonymous_7 replied...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 4:45 pm :
Hey, Thanks for the comment!
 
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