Night Light

October 16, 2011
One headlight,
Persistently cutting through the night. Penetrating the blackness and filling it with light.

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aurorairis said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 6:33 pm

Simple, but great and powerful!

Please check out some of my poems if you can!

Lexie96 said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 6:30 am
I like this a lot, the rhyme scheme is great. Do you think maybe you could check out my poem? Please?
Anonymous_7 replied...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 4:45 pm

Thanks for commenting. I sure will!


Risible said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 7:38 pm
I really like this! Good rthyme and use of rhyme. It's sharp and catchy. One thing I'd change would be put the line "Penetrating...and" on its own line. 
Anonymous_7 replied...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 4:45 pm
Hey, Thanks for the comment!
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