My (Everlasting) Love

October 14, 2011
By twiandsuperfan GOLD, Chassell, Michigan
twiandsuperfan GOLD, Chassell, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"When you wish upon a star..." -Walt Disney


My dear,
My love,
My timely Dove,
Caress me
In your arms,
Let us love
By naivety.
Let the stars
Fall around us,
As a million moments,
Yet to be
Wished upon.
Hold me
In your embrace,
Place a kiss
Upon my cheek.
Dream our Dreams
Together,
Under a sea
Of light.
Wait ‘til morning,
And bestow
Upon me,
Your everlasting
Love.


The author's comments:
Teen love... isn't it confusing?

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on Oct. 24 2011 at 5:31 pm
twiandsuperfan GOLD, Chassell, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"When you wish upon a star..." -Walt Disney

Thank you so much for reading my poem, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :)

on Oct. 20 2011 at 7:14 pm
MapleSyrup BRONZE, Peoria, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart." -William Wordworth.
"Imagination is the one weapon in the war against reality." -Jules De Gaultier

This reads just like teen love! You've captured it perfectly. You are an extraordinary poet!




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