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rain fall

October 7, 2011
By CreatingMadness BRONZE, Lake Tapps, Washington
CreatingMadness BRONZE, Lake Tapps, Washington
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the dreary day
comes upon us
once more
casting people to flee
seeking comfort indoors
but not I
I shall stay where I am
it does not bother me



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on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:10 pm
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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I really love this. It's just great. I love the rain too. I also love how you managed to fit such a big meaning into few words

 

 


on Nov. 22 2011 at 7:16 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

This is rediculously good! I love the simpicity of it all. You seem to say so much more than what is written, which is very rare to find. Keep writing! :)