October 11, 2011
By SavannahMcKenna PLATINUM, Waterman, Illinois
SavannahMcKenna PLATINUM, Waterman, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Dream a better dream

Don;t tell them a secret.
Your secret.
The secret you've hid.
You know what I'm talking about.
I hear the whispers in the hall.
The soft chatter with your name.
Your what everyone is talking about.
Make sure I don't become a part of it.
You've made the wrong friends.
At least if your trying to be mine.
Your friends,
my friends.
Are quite different.
We're too different.

The author's comments:
I would really like feedback on this one. I stumbled getting the right words and would really like any ideas of how to fix this.....thanks

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so_joy SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2012 at 8:32 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

I like this. No complaints. Describes some of my relationships. Great job! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

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