Different?

October 11, 2011
By SavannahMcKenna PLATINUM, Waterman, Illinois
SavannahMcKenna PLATINUM, Waterman, Illinois
30 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream a better dream


Don;t tell them a secret.
Your secret.
The secret you've hid.
You know what I'm talking about.
I hear the whispers in the hall.
The soft chatter with your name.
Your what everyone is talking about.
Make sure I don't become a part of it.
You've made the wrong friends.
At least if your trying to be mine.
Your friends,
my friends.
Are quite different.
Me,
you.
We're too different.


The author's comments:
I would really like feedback on this one. I stumbled getting the right words and would really like any ideas of how to fix this.....thanks

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so_joy SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2012 at 8:32 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

I like this. No complaints. Describes some of my relationships. Great job! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!




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