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When I Loved You

October 9, 2011
By Destany Webb BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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When I loved you it was November
When I loved you we were so happy

When I loved you I thought you felt the same

When I loved you
I thought you were the one
When I loved you, you were the only person I saw
When I loved you
it was the best time of my life
I thought nothing and no one could come
between us
I no longer feel the same
Now

I No Longer Love
You…….

© Caroline C., Coronado, CA

The author's comments:
my name is destany my birthday is november 6th im getting ready to turn 18 this year.I dont live with my monther i live with my aunt. im two years behind in school and im just trying my best to make it out of high school and go to college.i keep A's and B"s. love kids and i want to be a children doctor
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