Losing You

September 22, 2011
By jasont727 PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
jasont727 PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
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Favorite Quote:
If there was no change, there would be no butterflies.


in between words I lost you
and even through my whispers of
i
love


you
you never returned.
i checked the meadows with
the tall yellow grasses
and the
fiery

lightning




bugs
but it turns out
that my words
turned you away
forever


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A_____ said...
on Mar. 20 2012 at 7:55 am
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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I LOVE this.  I first clicked on it because the title sounded like it could be a song.  The style of the poem was fresh, imaginative, and innovative.  Great great job.


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