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As simple and concrete as the change of season
We subconsciously forget to put life into perspective.
To rejoice in the beauty of the falling leaves
Dark red, yellow, orange, and brown.




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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 12, 2013 at 11:38 pm:
I absolutely love this :) :) my favorite of your poems.
 
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KrasotaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 7, 2013 at 7:49 pm:
I like this poem, although I feel like you could've expanded a bit on it. Otherwise, great job! :D
 
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HazelGrace said...
Jun. 6, 2013 at 10:10 pm:
This is nice :)
 
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samwich7 said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 5:49 pm:
Short, simple, and great. Love it.
 
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sweetheart2598 said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 5:31 pm:

this is a few simple words of wisdome that we should all learn to live by GREAT JOB

 

 
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Akane-Ree said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:43 pm:
wow. you're right. we often rush places and don't really think about the things around us...
 
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Neytiri said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:36 pm:
WOW!! That's amazing!! 5/5 material there! It's so short and 'simple' but yet so expressive and meaningful! Well done hun!!! x x x <3
 
AnimaCordis replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:42 pm :
This is lovely! I love leaves! I didn't know they could mean so much more, next time i see leaves, i'll think of this.
 
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LivingMYLife said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:12 pm:
wow its different than most poetry but not bad at all! very god actually. i almost dont think you need the "authors comments"
 
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zombiescream.98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 3:56 pm:
I love your descriptions!
 
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careless-whisper said...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 7:09 pm:
this is pretty good it definetly shows that you have potential
 
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Wonderment said...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 4:44 pm:
I like it. It has good imgry, eventhough you said this is one of your bad poems, I don't think it was that bad. I think it shows budding talent.
 
JamieNicole replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:28 pm :
I really love it.
 
RaindanceMaggieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 4:26 pm :
its beautiful. its not long and hard to understand. and its beautiful! :)
 
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