Gone in the sky

September 30, 2011
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I can’t be saved
I won’t be found
Laying here
On the ground
The roof caved in
I’m all alone
My nightmares
Am I saved
I will be found
Flying high
In the sky
I might have died
But I’m not alone
My nightmares
I have been saved!

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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 7, 2011 at 6:04 am

I like it, I don't normally enjoy religious stuff, but this was much better than normal :)

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Stormlily This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 7:10 am
nice poem really deep, I feel the fear and sorrow. I think it's lying instead of laying though.
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