Sleeping Under Stars

October 3, 2011
By aquilailytequilashotz SILVER, Rego Park, New York
aquilailytequilashotz SILVER, Rego Park, New York
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Sticky stuck surfacing surreal sublime star shaped stickers stuck

Skin caressing eyes interesting dying heaving huff puff fluff dandruff enough

Finger tickle thighs wrinkle screams crinkle we mingle so fickle

Pierce fingernail soft folds wet tongue salt dry sand cactus canopy chorus

Kind soft silky velvet hair slip slide sudden tear blood shred rip unzip tear rough

Bristle kiss thistle this thrust must crush juice spurts passion spews

Throat creamed sliding collarbone calamity sweating sun moist oil palm tree

Not enough lift up teeth tender lip knuckle precious dip fiery slurping fluid

Body squeeze hand release faster thinking quicker drinking swifter speedier

Pause, we pause. Engine fizzle you drizzle kiss lips open wider squeeze tighter

Let’s go! Orient now locate now go! Sudden tear blood shred rip unzip tear rough

Finger tickle thighs wrinkle screams crinkle we mingle so fickle


The author's comments:
I would like feedback. Many people seem to have differing opinions about my style, which could be a bit of an acquired taste.

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dreamgazer12 said...
on Oct. 14 2011 at 11:47 pm
dreamgazer12, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Tough times don't last, but tough people do"
-ananymous running quote

you have a great sincopated beat, i really like it!




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