The Labyrinth

October 3, 2011
By SilentlyRising GOLD, Decatur, Georgia
SilentlyRising GOLD, Decatur, Georgia
13 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My pen is the barrel of the gun. Remind me which side you should be on."


Unsolvable
A rubix cube with seven colors
A maze with all ways blocked
Filled with riddles,
dangers,
traps,
and twisted shadows
Ready to strike without warning.
Will I ever escape its
cold grasp?
Or am I destined
to roam the
windowless passageways
forever
Never to see
the light of
day.



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on Oct. 14 2011 at 9:46 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

The imagery in this was really powerful overall. I think the metaphor worked amazingly well, and you definitely showed a sort of path that's ending was lost. Great job!!! :)




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