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A pencil in hand, I try to discuss the differing uses of Ser and Estar
But you tease me,
throw the paper in my face,
Then show me how much more
the world can be.

You’re so much fun to be around,
Because you don’t follow the normal progression
of thought,
Instead, preferring to choose a different path,
You amble along at the speed of light,
pulling me with you
away from orthodoxy, the straight-line
philosophy
and into unbelievable, all over the map.

Though some may stare in disapproval
at our tangential state of being,
Every night I say a silent thank you to
Freud –
Because of him, I’ve got a name
And a method to this brilliant madness.

You conduct my thoughts in a whirlwind,
and make simple existence a fantastical
dream,
An unbearable yet breathtaking venture
into everything that catches
our sparkling eyes.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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ImJustAGuyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 15 at 7:37 pm:
Check out my work please !  Im a new a upcoming writer
 
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HannSawyer15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 8, 2011 at 3:46 pm:
I really really loved this. Awesome. :)
 
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reblep said...
May 16, 2011 at 4:08 pm:

i can relate to this one hundred percent. especially since the boy i liked, and wrote so many poems about, was the one who teased me in spanish (:

i love this so much dont ever stop writing. 

 
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shy_Amu_girl said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 7:37 pm:
i really like this poem. im kinda new here (just created an account) and just finished 1 poem. in my language class, we had to share, and the poem that i put on here, was the one i shared. i was sooo nervous. espically because the poem i wrote was about a boy, even better, he was in the room, EVEN more better, stting next to me... i was shaking after, which made him ask me if i was ok. still shaking now..... is this common? lol
 
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MyApocalypticThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 11:39 am:

Way fantastic.

Please never stop writing, world needs talent like yours to keep it beautiful :D

 
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dontforgetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 8:15 am:
aww:) this is so relateable it's freakyy! I feel the same way about the boy that sits behind me in spanishhh!
 
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BitterSweet1993 said...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 7:58 am:
Amazing. I hope I can find something that great too. <3
 
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KelseyMai said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 1:02 pm:
Aww. Soo sweet.
 
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mz iimm dhatt one said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 8:36 am:
okay ummhhii ii like your poem itz nice n ii wiilllike to use iit.... thank you.....
 
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CHEERspirit said...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 9:47 pm:
i feel this way right now with a boy i know and gosh you hit my gut with this poem. keep it up this rocked :)
 
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OpenDoors said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 1:01 pm:
this was such an amazing poem. there really are no words to describe about your poem. Maybe unique!! (in a good way i mean)
 
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Dianeyka said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 12:33 pm:

this is so cutee :0

I Love itt :)

 
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HalliewoodYeaah This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 4:22 am:
I don't think I'm saying anything the other 23 commenters haven't, but -- that was amazing, absolutely beautiful. keep it up :)
 
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Izzy=) said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 9:27 pm:
wows=] that was great
 
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Only,IThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 11:55 pm:
God, this is beautiful...absolutely amazing.
 
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Blue-eyed_Hippy-chick said...
Aug. 5, 2009 at 1:32 am:
That is amazin! Love it to peices.
 
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Lamar Cole said...
Jul. 14, 2009 at 6:54 pm:
The Night Was Made For Romance

The night was made for romance.
In the night our two hearts dance.
Under the stars our lips touch.
In the garden your embrace means so much.

The night was made for love.
Our hearts cooing like a white dove.
Your eyes sparkling like diamonds so white.
I love you darling with all my might.

The night was made for caring and trust.
And darling, God made this night for us.
 
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Lamar Cole said...
Jul. 14, 2009 at 6:46 pm:
Our Love

As long as there is love, I will cherish you.

As long as there is life, I will love you.

As long as the stars shine above, I will want you.

As long as there are waves in the ocean, I will need you.

As long as there is heaven above, there will always be our love.
 
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Lamar Cole said...
Jul. 11, 2009 at 6:20 am:
Only Love Love can sometimes be fresh. Love can sometimes be new. Love can sometimes make you happy. And sometimes make you blue. Love is the light that radiates from your eyes. Love is your image floating in the skies. Love is true. And darling, the only love for me is you.
 
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cross-i'd-leopard said...
Apr. 20, 2009 at 3:34 am:
u no how to use figurative language.
 
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brown eyed beautie said...
Jan. 29, 2009 at 1:18 pm:
this is awesome:)
 
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fletcher said...
Dec. 16, 2008 at 6:42 pm:
its not my tipe of article but i liked it. i was pretty surprised.
 
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porcelaingirl said...
Oct. 24, 2008 at 2:08 am:
I love the meaning behind this poem! However, I have to agree that some parts need a bit of editing to strengthen the poem. Sometimes fewer words are better, as long as they are thoughtfully chosen to fit to exactally what your trying to describe.
 
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*NightRain*214* said...
Oct. 23, 2008 at 8:28 pm:
I love the emotions and flow to this piece. And for ser and estar I totally get how you feel.
 
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RabbitHoleExplorador said...
Oct. 21, 2008 at 1:07 am:
I love this. Especially since I had to do the whole ser vs estar thing a few weeks ago! =D
 
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GSMalave said...
Oct. 17, 2008 at 10:10 pm:
It's crazy because i know exactly what you are talking about. Seriously, I was reading about free association and fell in love with the sheer idea. And ser and estar? I still have no clue about them!
 
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Icyblue241 said...
Oct. 17, 2008 at 3:59 am:
I like this poem as well. I like your use of words, but I would also recommend deleting some words so that you can emphazise your main focus.
 
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FarmOverThere123 said...
Oct. 16, 2008 at 8:19 pm:
This is amazing, i love it!(:
 
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TaroPig said...
Oct. 13, 2008 at 4:10 pm:
This is really, really good. Thanks for making me day! ;D I love the stanzas, really well done... and the last part is so pretty!
 
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XxMidnightxX said...
Oct. 3, 2008 at 5:30 pm:
Wow i really know exactly how you feel in this poem GREAT emotions!!!
 
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TaroPig said...
Oct. 2, 2008 at 10:30 pm:
Your poem = my inspiration. I really liked how the words were used beautifully, instead of sounding like they were forced out. Love the poem. The best poem I've read this year, in fact.
 
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Sweetsilence751 said...
Oct. 2, 2008 at 6:46 pm:
I like your poem it has real potential but i think you should go through and delete some extra words that get in the way of the true message. Just a thought
 
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Jenu said...
Oct. 2, 2008 at 12:08 am:
Great poem! Sorta describes me
 
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baybehh1992 said...
Sept. 30, 2008 at 4:14 pm:
This poem is moving... i really like it.Its very sweet.
 
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topaz said...
Sept. 27, 2008 at 4:17 pm:
excellent imagery
 
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Age123 said...
Sept. 25, 2008 at 5:07 pm:
it was good.
 
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