Only when Lit

September 23, 2011
By bahannahpeel PLATINUM, Bloomington, Illinois
bahannahpeel PLATINUM, Bloomington, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Schools corrupt the mind." The Loco Focos


Jack
your eyes are bloodshot.
You smell musky,
green.
You look dazed, but
it's the only time you've ever
really looked at me
like there was a person inside you.
Without the weed,
you are just a lantern
with no candle.
A Jack-O-Lantern (ha)
unlit.
But when you're soaring,
it's the only time you ever seem
real.
Blazed,
you say.
You're blazed.
And you won't remember any of this.
"I feel... free," you say.
You're blazing through my mind
in this sudden shock of
real.


The author's comments:
this is about one of my close friends, jack... :(
I love you buddy <3

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on Oct. 3 2011 at 8:10 pm
bahannahpeel PLATINUM, Bloomington, Illinois
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Schools corrupt the mind." The Loco Focos

this boy is now my boyfriend :) andd yeah. happiness.




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