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In a Second She Was Gone

In a second she was gone
The girl who once stood tall and strong
The girl who once thrived on life
Slowly began to die in strife
Each word she heard hurt her more
Until death held open a welcoming door
Her friends all said they should have known
Who knew she felt so alone?
But in a second she was gone
The girl who once stood tall and strong





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JinxedLoverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 2:44 pm
wow i love this. It reminds me of those who dont have many friends and get teased alot. Infact, it reminds me of me... keep up the great work :)
 
14MNKMizzu1 replied...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 4:44 pm
thanx i'm glad you liked it :) that girl was once me too..... I really love getting feedback on my work
 
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