Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Escape

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
Lines of old poems and songs race though my mind. How can i escape if my escape is cluttered.Cluttered with old excuses.



Join the Discussion


This article has 6 comments. Post your own!

KateLA said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 7:40 pm:
It is nice and straight to the point, but I would suggest delving a bit deeper into you emotions and how you felt. Gave 5/5!
 
KateLA replied...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 7:42 pm :
Ugh, in the above comment I made, I meant "your", not you. I hate it when I make such simple mistakes!!!
 
KateLA replied...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 7:43 pm :
Ugh, in the above comment I made, I meant "your", not you. I hate it when I make such simple mistakes!
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Ranea said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 10:15 pm:
straight to the point and well written. good jon
 
Ranea replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 10:15 pm :
oops i meant good job
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Lexie96 said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 9:07 pm:
Love the first line, check out my stuff sometime?
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Site Feedback