Escape

September 11, 2011
By LillyBelle13 BRONZE, Statesboro, Georgia
LillyBelle13 BRONZE, Statesboro, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
the worst fear is of fear itself.


Lines of old poems and songs race though my mind. How can i escape if my escape is cluttered.Cluttered with old excuses.

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece about a girl that used to be my friend.

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KateLA GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 7:43 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

Ugh, in the above comment I made, I meant "your", not you. I hate it when I make such simple mistakes!

KateLA GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 7:42 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

Ugh, in the above comment I made, I meant "your", not you. I hate it when I make such simple mistakes!!!

KateLA GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 7:40 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

It is nice and straight to the point, but I would suggest delving a bit deeper into you emotions and how you felt. Gave 5/5!

Ranea GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 10:15 pm
Ranea GOLD, Elkhart, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It can always be worse, so put on a happy face and laugh!" (my own quote) &
"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words may scar my soul."

oops i meant good job

Ranea GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 10:15 pm
Ranea GOLD, Elkhart, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It can always be worse, so put on a happy face and laugh!" (my own quote) &
"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words may scar my soul."

straight to the point and well written. good jon

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 9:07 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Love the first line, check out my stuff sometime?


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