August 24, 2011
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lights glimmering through
glass windows
casting a yellow glow
on her sprawled body
crumpled on the floor
pale limbs
covered by long black sleeves
fingers stretched out
as if to grasp
empty bottle
orange as the sunset
candy of the dead
litters the floor

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In_Love_with_Writing said...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 3:58 pm
Well I wish there was a picture. And it could use a little bit of work, but you did well. Can you comment and rate some of my work?
ErisRose replied...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 10:27 pm
Thank you! I'd love to :)
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