Sun still Shines

September 1, 2011
By LivEvil BRONZE, Mooresville, North Carolina
LivEvil BRONZE, Mooresville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
If it doesn't make sense it makes sense to the senseless-me!
Normalicy is subjective, and your opinion is wrong.


Lined black dull and grey,
Clouded, blocked and insufferable.
Still I walk on,
Heels bloody broken with rocks,
Swollen purple but still moving.

Endless sky rolling on, in
A grey fashion.
Never will I know
Whether it is night or day
Never will I know
When this hardship will end

Tears have mixed with sweat,
Stupidity mixed with fear.
Endlessly I walk
This road for hope that
Something, or someone,
Is waiting for me.

Sometimes I feel like
Giving up. Others I
Just can’t move.
Yet to stay on track
I always remember,
Even beyond the grey clouds
And the endless pain and fear,
Beyond the dark veil,
The sun still shines.


The author's comments:
It's an inspirational piece, hopefully. Most people said it was dipressing, but I still enjoy it. I'm sorry if there are any spelling or grammatical errors in the poem or this little.....whatever it is called.

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Matice BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 12:11 pm
Matice BRONZE, O&#39Fallon, Missouri
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"Maria, first, let me say that you will most certainly regret it. Second, let me say that I'm in."-Smith

Sweet! I liked it. You really had the whole thing going very smoothly through the whole poem.

If you have a spare second, I'd love it if you would take a check out and rate/comment on some of my work.


LivEvil BRONZE said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 5:07 pm
LivEvil BRONZE, Mooresville, North Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If it doesn't make sense it makes sense to the senseless-me!
Normalicy is subjective, and your opinion is wrong.

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