words

September 1, 2011
By darkened-love-writer PLATINUM, Morgantown, Kentucky
darkened-love-writer PLATINUM, Morgantown, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"WHY WASTE UR TIME TRYIN TO FIT IN WHEN U WERE MADE TO STAND OUT!!!"


word cold as a winters day
stabbing me like knives
never once do u ask how i feel
u just sI'mple say
these words that kill me
slowly inside
these words bring me tears
questioning why I'm still here
but u say these word anyway
cause u truly don't care

The author's comments:
i see people at every where in the world be picked on and called names. whether u know it hurts them or not u shouldn't say rude uncalled for stuff. as Maya Angelou says is "that word are very powerful" and they really are.

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on Sep. 22 2011 at 1:10 pm
darkened-love-writer PLATINUM, Morgantown, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"WHY WASTE UR TIME TRYIN TO FIT IN WHEN U WERE MADE TO STAND OUT!!!"

thanks for the feedback

on Sep. 21 2011 at 1:07 pm
UnknownToTheWorld PLATINUM, Binghamton, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Knowing nothing can be better than knowing to much.

i really like this poem and the meaning behind it. it may be short but it has all the emotions

on Sep. 19 2011 at 12:55 pm
darkened-love-writer PLATINUM, Morgantown, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"WHY WASTE UR TIME TRYIN TO FIT IN WHEN U WERE MADE TO STAND OUT!!!"

to justin beiber if u think this poem is horrible u really need to recunstruct ur comprehension of poetry.

 

to dont forget thanks for tellin him how it is lolz.


on Sep. 16 2011 at 2:32 pm
dontforget GOLD, Cortland, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The best things in life are left unseen. That's why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream."

Write*****

on Sep. 16 2011 at 2:30 pm
dontforget GOLD, Cortland, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The best things in life are left unseen. That's why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream."

That's kind. I'm sure you would love to have someone right such rude comments on your piece as well. Ever heard of constructive critisism?

justinbieber said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 8:12 am
justinbieber, Atlanta, Georgia
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i rated it one star i hated it it was demtedly disturbing whatbwere u thinking :l

on Sep. 15 2011 at 12:53 pm
darkened-love-writer PLATINUM, Morgantown, Kentucky
27 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"WHY WASTE UR TIME TRYIN TO FIT IN WHEN U WERE MADE TO STAND OUT!!!"

thank ill try nd get tht done.

 


on Sep. 14 2011 at 3:57 pm
dontforget GOLD, Cortland, New York
15 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best things in life are left unseen. That's why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream."

I really like this concept, and totally agree with you. Although, I find some of these lines cliche, it's still pretty good. One suggestion I have is to use more dramatic adjectives for an intense emotion like this. Such as piercing me with a thousand knives, or as cold as a blistering winters day. Good job though:)

on Sep. 12 2011 at 1:07 pm
darkened-love-writer PLATINUM, Morgantown, Kentucky
27 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"WHY WASTE UR TIME TRYIN TO FIT IN WHEN U WERE MADE TO STAND OUT!!!"

i feel the exact same. i always tell people that ur words my not leave scars u can see but they do leave scars.

on Sep. 8 2011 at 7:26 pm
Laurel15 BRONZE, Eastlake, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams." Eleanor Roosevelt

I totally agree with you and this poem. You know that saying, "sticks and stones can break my bones, but words will never hurt me?" I think words hurt even more. Enough is enough and people need to get over themselves and realize that they are no better than the person they are picking on.




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