Dying

September 1, 2011
By Cielo4ever GOLD, Santa Monica, California
Cielo4ever GOLD, Santa Monica, California
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Thats Just How The Cookie Crumbles ;) -I have no idea who said this


When you die
It doesn't end with a bang
or a crash
theres no flashes of your life
because it never ends.
Get it?
It just keeps going...
and whether you're staring at your family eating
without you
Or watching them go
to your funeral
Or crying when they
forget you
It never ends
That feeling
deep inside of you
tugging at the heart you used to have
It ends
Although it seems like it wont
It does...


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on Oct. 5 2011 at 11:44 am
Cielo4ever GOLD, Santa Monica, California
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Favorite Quote:
Thats Just How The Cookie Crumbles ;) -I have no idea who said this

haha yeah I think I wrote it in like...5th grade?

on Oct. 5 2011 at 11:43 am
Cielo4ever GOLD, Santa Monica, California
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Thats Just How The Cookie Crumbles ;) -I have no idea who said this

<3? haha 

on Oct. 5 2011 at 11:43 am
Cielo4ever GOLD, Santa Monica, California
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Thats Just How The Cookie Crumbles ;) -I have no idea who said this

Oh I totally will haha and thanks! 

Phoenixx GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 5:51 pm
Phoenixx GOLD, Toronto, Other
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i love this, its different but in a totally awesome way! 

on Sep. 6 2011 at 7:54 pm
Laura_Oliver GOLD, Manchester, Connecticut
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This is a really nice poem! I would also appreciate it if you could check out some of my poems, which are written in the same non-stanza style!

on Sep. 6 2011 at 5:13 pm
thinkofsomethingbetter GOLD, Tallmadge, Ohio
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in short, being vegen just makes you better then everyone else.
- scott pilgrim vs the world. best movie ever!

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