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When you die
It doesn't end with a bang
or a crash
theres no flashes of your life
because it never ends.
Get it?
It just keeps going...
and whether you're staring at your family eating
without you
Or watching them go
to your funeral
Or crying when they
forget you
It never ends
That feeling
deep inside of you
tugging at the heart you used to have
It ends
Although it seems like it wont
It does...





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Phoenixx said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 5:51 pm
i love this, its different but in a totally awesome way! 
 
Cielo4ever replied...
Oct. 5, 2011 at 11:44 am
haha yeah I think I wrote it in like...5th grade?
 
Laura_Oliver said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 7:54 pm
This is a really nice poem! I would also appreciate it if you could check out some of my poems, which are written in the same non-stanza style!
 
Cielo4ever replied...
Oct. 5, 2011 at 11:43 am
Oh I totally will haha and thanks! 
 
thinkofsomthingbetter said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 5:13 pm
<3           
 
Cielo4ever replied...
Oct. 5, 2011 at 11:43 am
<3? haha 
 
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