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August 26, 2011
By Freedom.ThroughPens GOLD, Alpharetta, Georgia
Freedom.ThroughPens GOLD, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
“Anyone who has never made a mistake has never tried anything new.” -Einstein


A bus stop becomes a cell tower.
Caught up in a glowing mesh
Occupied? No –
Look at it like we're afraid to be alone
Look at our hands – the device
The scary abyss of data
Scared to seem alone – distraction
Afraid of no connection. Impersonal
Impersonal touch of the keyboard.
One touch – ping.
Look up to see the world pass you by. But quick.
Shattered – alone but not alone in thought.
Ping – message received.



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on Sep. 4 2011 at 4:01 pm
Freedom.ThroughPens GOLD, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
“Anyone who has never made a mistake has never tried anything new.” -Einstein

Glad to hear it - I was hoping I'd have that effect on someone!

on Sep. 1 2011 at 9:18 pm
shapeshifter56 GOLD, Cave Creek, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Instead of waiting for the storm to pass, learn to dance in the rain."
--Unknown Author

Wow. This is awesome. It's so intense. I completely agree too!