Alone

August 20, 2011
By BiancaSantorum PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
BiancaSantorum PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
" If you don't stand for something, You'll fall for anything" "When life kicks you on your knee's its a good position to Pray"


I stand alone
Empty hearted
Empty mind
A memory of a guy who was a waste of time

I hold no grudge
And i do not hate
Because getting hurt
Was my mistake

A lesson to remember
A lesson to learn
Mess with fire
and will surely get burned
I wanted to swim without getting wet
a decision I'll surely regret


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on Jan. 18 2012 at 6:32 pm
BiancaSantorum PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
" If you don't stand for something, You'll fall for anything" "When life kicks you on your knee's its a good position to Pray"

Thanks Apreciate The Love :)

Dudet95 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 10:16 am
Dudet95 GOLD, Ottawa, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Your mom, if you don't know the past... You're doomed to repeat it.

"A lesson to remember A lesson to learn Mess with fire and will surely get burned," I love this line! First off This is a great poem. It's sad but you did a awesome job so I feel happy. It was dipression you were writing about. You were writing about your mistake about trusting him and that has got me loving this poem. I screw up... Alot! So usually when I read poems about Screwing up I tend not to agree with them because I know how it feels, but this is like how my mind works. Ths one poem explains me.lol Awesome job. It's sad but you deserve five stars.




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