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Paint me red
Hiding deep inside my head

Watching through the shattered glass
I forgot
But that’s my heart

Hear me now
In my time of need
Killing me will spread the seed

Of deep consent
To constant dark.
The pain that hides

Within my scars.
All this I write with just one fear
That I’ll never get out of here



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sunnyallday said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 6:00 pm:
Wow this is really good. And I totally get this... I think :/ :)
 
secrets_of_silence replied...
Oct. 31, 2011 at 8:41 pm :
thanx            
 
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DestineeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:39 pm:
Wow! I love this! And..I dunno, it sounds like it's about a not-so-good relationship, but I can still somehow relate. 
 
miracle_of_hope replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:42 pm :
(nervous laughter) ok this may sound funny but i was writing to myself
 
DestineeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:43 pm :
Oh. that actually explains a lot. I guess like being trapped inside your own body and who you're destined to be? I sort of feel that way sometimes too. :)
 
miracle_of_hope replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:45 pm :
yeah kind of. i was going through one of the toughest times of my life when i wrote it.
 
DestineeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:46 pm :
Ah. I hope it's better now. :) "Hurt free". :)
 
miracle_of_hope replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:48 pm :
yeah my life is definatly looking up
 
DestineeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:49 pm :
That's great. :) 
 
miracle_of_hope replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:51 pm :
yeah it is
 
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Nikki_13 said...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 6:50 pm:
I adore this. Just... Wow. Its almost scary how easy your work is to relate too.
 
miracle_of_hope replied...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 3:49 pm :

thanx

it was a really personal poem when i wrote it so its nice to know that its relateble 

 
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casielynnxoxo said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 7:39 pm:
The first stanza is my favorite, I like the message this sends.
 
miracle_of_hope replied...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 3:50 pm :
thanx     
 
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