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The Memories

I can't believe it's all over
All those years are gone
But the memories,
Will stay forever

I will never forget,
The days we had
Just talking,
And laughing,

The time when
I wrote that song,
And the times when
I told told you how much
You meant to me,

The times when I got jealous,
And the the time when
I discovered,
You were stronger
Than I ever was,

The times when
We tried to help that one friend,
And the times when you
Told me you secret,
That nobody else knew,

The times when
We trusted each other
And we
Believed in each other,

The time will come,
And we will go separate ways,
But I will never forget
Those times
And the memories
That we've made,

And as we move on,
I wish you good look
With life,
And the dream
That you are already living,




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Rayne said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 1:54 pm:
I like the last stanza. I relate to this <3
 
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Mystiecub said...
Sept. 4, 2011 at 1:48 pm:
dude did you steal my diary or something? LOL good job :D
 
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 3:53 pm :
haha thanks! :)
 
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dark_armor1This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 10:07 am:
very sad/stong poem. but when u say "your stronger than i am" by looking at your poem and seeing they way your letting go of him, just shows how srtong you are. i tend to always write about relationships. and this poem i really liked. :)
 
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 4:37 pm :
thanks! :)
 
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SayshThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 5:04 pm:
here were a few typos through out, but other than that it was totatlly awesome!!! :) i loved this!! great work once again!
 
SayshThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 5:05 pm :

*there.

-.- typo in my comment about typos lol

 
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 5:09 pm :
haha its fine! and thanks! :)
 
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FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 6:58 pm:
I like this poem and it's relatable. I guess this goes not only for besties but also for any other relationship...
 
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 7:16 pm :
thanks! :)
 
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Aidyl said...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 6:17 pm:
I really love this poem, it makes me think of summer and of times gone by. Sort of nostalgic, but not really sad. Love the last couple lines. 
 
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 6:41 pm :
thank you :)
 
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