August 15, 2011
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I don't need you to catch me;
this time I brought a parachute.
Dropped into the sky,
and into the air I flew.
Nothing meant to you,
traded in like a pair of shoes.
Lie after lie, I could die.
Why did you spare the truth?

With stars in my eyes,
I never realized,
your heart was still take-able.
Surrounded in lies,
to my surprise,
I was replaceable.
With our love at demise,
I wish you good tries,
too bad for you, I'm unbreakable.

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Lola_Black said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 7:24 pm
Normally, I can't stand rhymes. But I make an exception for this! Great work! (yes, I would also love it if you checked out some of my work : )
kaykaybeck said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 12:21 pm

This is really good! Great job (: check out some of my stuff?


Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 11:46 pm
This is so good!I really like the rhyme and how you said 'traded in like a pair of shoes'. Could you please critique something I've written? thanks so much!
The~crayon~in~my~heart said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 10:13 pm
this is so dang beautiful, i wish could write like you ;)
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