August 15, 2011
By AustinJames SILVER, Forest City, Iowa
AustinJames SILVER, Forest City, Iowa
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I think I'll try defying gravity"

I don't need you to catch me;
this time I brought a parachute.
Dropped into the sky,
and into the air I flew.
Nothing meant to you,
traded in like a pair of shoes.
Lie after lie, I could die.
Why did you spare the truth?

With stars in my eyes,
I never realized,
your heart was still take-able.
Surrounded in lies,
to my surprise,
I was replaceable.
With our love at demise,
I wish you good tries,
too bad for you, I'm unbreakable.

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on Aug. 17 2011 at 7:24 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I've always been famous. It's just everybody's just now finding out." --Lady Gaga

Normally, I can't stand rhymes. But I make an exception for this! Great work! (yes, I would also love it if you checked out some of my work : )

on Aug. 17 2011 at 12:21 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

This is really good! Great job (: check out some of my stuff?


Harebelle GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 11:46 pm
Harebelle GOLD, Vancouver, Other
14 articles 1 photo 121 comments
This is so good!I really like the rhyme and how you said 'traded in like a pair of shoes'. Could you please critique something I've written? thanks so much!

on Aug. 16 2011 at 10:13 pm
biggerinfinities SILVER, Superior, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We accept the love we think we deserve.”
― Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower

this is so dang beautiful, i wish could write like you ;)


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