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simple and kind

August 16, 2011
By Fauxx BRONZE, Acworth, Georgia
Fauxx BRONZE, Acworth, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"if you always do what youve always done youll always get what youve always got"


love is simple
love is kind
love is peaceful
love is blind
love can hurt
love can bind
love can kill
love can grind


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on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:28 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

his is so nice :), i love how its short and it rymes, i just want to put it on a cute Hallmark card :).....u could make serious monney lololol. awesome! :) love is a beautiful subject

on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:20 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Wow, this is short, sweet and to the point.  I know this is free verse, but I think it would look better if you capitalized the beginning of every line.  Other than that, excellent work!