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Quiet

Quirky was our relationship,
Quit was the action you chose to take,
Quiet is how I am now,
Quiet describes anything but you,
quiet is how that girl you treated like me is now.





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Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 3:33 pm
i love the way short but also how it's very meaningful. When i finished reading this i was still thinking about the meaning :) good job! 
 
Regs_the_Shorty replied...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 4:11 pm
Thank you!!!! :)
 
Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 12:23 pm
This is so meaningful! I like how you started all the lines with words that start with 'q', it gave your poem a...well...quirky feel!
 
Regs_the_Shorty said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 12:56 pm
Thank you!
 
Sophie Rose C. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 3:54 am

The first word, "quirky" kind of gives the poem a... jerky feel. not sure why.

The mystery was very interesting. And quiet!

 
Regs_the_Shorty replied...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 6:46 pm
Thank you!
 
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