I shall see MAG

July 29, 2011
By AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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I shall see your suffering soon,
only harsher than mine,
Given to you by the world
to me as a healing sign,

God will tell you how,
how expensive were my tears,
uncountable you gave,
like the days we spent which seemed
as never-ending years,

I shall see your heart break soon
into pieces such as mine,
over a person you'll think the world of,
yet the world sees as a gutter dime,

I shall see my friend,
the whole world shall see,
the result of my suffering,
through my eyes, your lies,
only this time the misery you'll attend.


The author's comments:
My mother, whom I thought the world of, left me and my siblings.

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on Dec. 31 2012 at 1:28 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

Emotional poem, I love it! Can you check out my work and rate and comment on it. It'll make my day. Thanks!

on Feb. 7 2012 at 5:55 am
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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Thank you! It means a lot. I'm sure you know how t feels like :')

on Feb. 5 2012 at 12:19 am
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

I read this once, and thought of a broken-hearted girlfriend. Once i read your notes, I could see your anger at your mother. This is a poem that can be applied to so many situations. Great writing!

Fizza SILVER said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 6:45 am
Fizza SILVER, Raipur, Other
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Nice poem. just like when u want to curse someone... nice work. :)

on Dec. 20 2011 at 7:26 am
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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thank you!

cookiegirl said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 7:21 am
This is beautiful and unique:). I love the way its written.

on Oct. 23 2011 at 3:29 pm
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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Thank you and sure!

on Oct. 23 2011 at 3:28 pm
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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Thank you!!!! :)

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 11:21 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

This is beautiful, think you could check out some of my work sometime?

on Oct. 23 2011 at 6:44 am
MarieLouiseA SILVER, Newmarket, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing's Impossible, The world is your dream.
In your eyes, the sky's a different blue.

This is brilliant (: keep writing!

on Sep. 13 2011 at 1:57 pm
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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How?

on Sep. 13 2011 at 6:43 am

Seriously?

Seriously.

<3 <3


SarahRoberts said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 6:37 am
SarahRoberts, Lahore, Georgia
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You made your pont

SarahRoberts said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 6:36 am
SarahRoberts, Lahore, Georgia
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Impressive. I liked your story, Once upon a Josh Miranda time. even better!

Emily56 said...
on Sep. 11 2011 at 4:00 am
Emily56, Islamabad, Ohio
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I think it's quite harsh in a way. 

muttomomi said...
on Sep. 11 2011 at 3:50 am
muttomomi, Lahore, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Unlimited!!

Exactly. I love the raw emotion.

muttomomi said...
on Sep. 11 2011 at 3:49 am
muttomomi, Lahore, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Unlimited!!

A very deep and well written poem. I loved it. 

on Sep. 10 2011 at 2:52 am
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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Thank you and sure I'll love to go through your work. (:

on Sep. 9 2011 at 12:42 pm
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

this is stunning. i understand exactly what you went through.  5/5 <3

read some of my work please. your input means the world to me. (:


on Sep. 9 2011 at 12:09 pm
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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Thank you. 3 comments on my first ever poem. I feel accomplished to be honest.


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