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Noticeable Distraught

July 29, 2011
By BloodyMarreh SILVER, Teaneck, New Jersey
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I noticed those eyes and I had the strangest feeling that an impending doom was upon our souls I wonder if I will ever see you again but then I notice that I see you in the skies and I get a chilling feeling that you have been killed then I feel a hand barely touch my shoulder..I know it's you I turn around and hug you and then you stab me once in the heart and as a fall to the ground I see tears come down your face

© Ashley S., Brownsburg, IN

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When i was in the pain of love
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