I Dream of You

June 10, 2011
By joyfuldancer SILVER, Easton, Maryland
joyfuldancer SILVER, Easton, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not a perfect person, I'm a forgiven person.


Right now as I think of you, I can nearly feel your touch. Even though I'm here and you're there, I can almost feel you laying right next to me; your strong arms holding me closely and tightly. As I think of my head resting on your chest, I can almost feel your heart beating...I can almost feel your touch. I can nearly hear you breathe. I can almost feel your lips just barely touching mine! As I dream of running my fingers through your hair my heart beats fast. Just then, when I think my dream is over, I take a deep breath and it begins again.


The author's comments:
Anyone who is in a long distance relationship can relate quite well to this poem.

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on Aug. 4 2011 at 9:25 am
joyfuldancer SILVER, Easton, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not a perfect person, I'm a forgiven person.

Thank you.  That really was my main point and goal when I wrote this because I have been thru a few LDRs and am currently in one again right now.  I'm very glad u enjoyed it.

God bless,

Joy


on Aug. 4 2011 at 9:23 am
joyfuldancer SILVER, Easton, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not a perfect person, I'm a forgiven person.

Thank you so much!  Please check out some of my other poems as well:)

God bless,

Joy


on Aug. 3 2011 at 12:10 pm
Annabelle294 SILVER, Branford, Connecticut
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I absolutely love this, and it is so easy for anyone to relate to who has been through this

on Aug. 3 2011 at 8:53 am
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

I dont know what too say besides... I LOVED IT (: . It truley was a great poem, I could feel the mood and almost feel myself being the charecter from the brilliant use of the discripive word. However, Just try too make it with stanzas. I mean, Its great and that dosent bother me at all! I just have a feeling some others mite say the same! Never give up on poetry, your amazing!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:36 pm
joyfuldancer SILVER, Easton, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not a perfect person, I'm a forgiven person.

Thank you:)  I sure will:)

God bless,

Joy


Bambi67 SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 7:08 pm
Bambi67 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
9 articles 1 photo 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
remember that the future comes one day at a time.
Dean Acheson

very nice,like it. check out my work =)

on Aug. 2 2011 at 6:07 pm
joyfuldancer SILVER, Easton, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not a perfect person, I'm a forgiven person.

Thanks so much!  I really love to hear feedback from people who read my work:)

God bless,

Joy


on Aug. 2 2011 at 1:55 pm
Cute and relateable. You hit all the right feelings in just the right way


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