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Candid

Her candid smile,
buries itself in your soul.
Her shining eyes,
like dark magenta skies,
reflect sweet memories.
Her laugh will echo,
in your mind for days.
You tell her she's perfect,
and her cheeks turn rosy.
She flips her hair back,
shrugging off her beauty.



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LazyDaisyLovesYou said...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 10:52 pm:
This is good! There's definitely some imagery in there.
 
Raytheraym replied...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 4:12 pm :
Thank you!
 
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leafyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 7:21 pm:
love this, the imagery is great. keep up the nice work!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 8:48 pm :
Thanks! :)
 
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WiseGirl said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 7:19 pm:
Beautifully written! Great imagery!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 9:28 pm :
Thank you!
 
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Alon_Freevoice said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:30 am:
The poem's as beautiful as she is. :) Short but sweet :)
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:36 am :
Thank you so much! :)
 
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hanging_girl_666This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 11:58 pm:
ow does this not have any comment yet? Thats awesome! Better than some of them in the magazine!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:37 am :
Because it's so new. And thank you! Sadly, I've never been published in the magazine.
 
JerseyGirl716 replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 4:32 pm :
Couldn't agree more, I love this poem! It's perfect!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 5:01 pm :
Thank you!
 
BrightBurningCampeadorThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 10:23 pm :
It's unfortunate how many great poems don't get in the mag. Good job on this one!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 10:31 pm :
Thank you! :)
 
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