Looking back

July 21, 2011
By MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.


Straight-faced,
no lace;
Black and white reveals.
Hid tears,
bid fears;
Jokes are just a veil.
Nothing new,
not a fool;
Goals become a must.
Walking on,
looking back;
Not enough to stop.



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on Jul. 29 2011 at 5:23 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

thankyou :) I'm glad you like it

leafy said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 3:20 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion. 
Ernest Hemingway: I hate it. 
Gil: You haven't even read it yet. 
Ernest Hemingway: If it's bad, I'll hate it. If it's good, then I'll be envious and hate it even more. You don't want the opinion of another writer. 

i like this poem a lot, its got a nice, unique flow and a good message. keep up the nice work! 5/5


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